Holy crap. This was AWESOME. I actually sat and read the whole story in one go because I couldn't look away. I loved every minute of it. You did a superb job of slowly bringing together both of them and really making the reader cheer for these two to wind up together. Also, I have to say THANK YOU for adding an element of danger and suspense. I like the occasional cute fic that's all smushy and fluffy but having all that AND an adventure makes me very happy. I like the element of danger.

I think you got the dialog down pat too. I could hear the characters talking in my head and I actually laughed out loud at a couple of Dean's lines. Overall, this was a story I absolutely adored and I look forward to seeing what you write up next. ;)