Date: 2008-03-15 07:18 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Really cute. I love the idea of John as a kid.

Also, You might want to go through the fic again though cause there were some spelling errors/typos. (ex. the image of his emotionally stunted team leader sobbing wildy in the 'gate room. Should be wildly.; For a few moments, organized choas reigns; clarifies not clarifys, and a couple more.)
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